Friday

the universe is strange and so are we




we were too rare to die
too strong to survive
strange ones gleaming in the sun's light

we are so effortlessly wonderful
that even the brightest of stars envied our shine

we found home in the vast universe
traveling from planet to planet
in our minds, or maybe in reality

the universe called us home
we followed the call
we never looked back and disappeared

into the wild, where we opened our hearts, chaotic.


thanks for reading,
noor

18 comments:

  1. Wow, your writing is beautiful.
    I always enjoy reading it :-)

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    1. thank you Jollygirl! that's so sweet <3

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  2. I love this so much! You're an amazing writer ♥
    Amy xx

    Little Moon Dragon

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  3. This is lovely. I enjoyed it! <3

    xoxo Morning

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    1. Thanks Morning! It will never compare to your writing :P <3

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  4. You're a brilliant writer, you should consider writing a short collection of poems.

    Meme xx

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    1. Thank you! I've tried but I can't write enough to create an entire collection :(

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  5. Ughhh so pretty. I always admire people who can write poetry because I suck at it. xD

    // katie grace
    a writer's faith

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  6. "Too rare to die" afhdhsg gr8 reference

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  7. I really liked this poem! I'm not the best at poetry, but I really enjoy reading it. Today I flew on a plane for the first time(unaccompanied!), and it was so beautiful because we took off during sunrise, so I saw the sunrise combined with seeing the buildings get smaller and smaller below the plane, and it was beautiful. This poem reminded me of that moment.

    Bridgette | A Bit of This and That

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