we were too rare to die
too strong to survive
strange ones gleaming in the sun's light
we are so effortlessly wonderful
that even the brightest of stars envied our shine
we found home in the vast universe
traveling from planet to planet
in our minds, or maybe in reality
the universe called us home
we followed the call
we never looked back and disappeared
into the wild, where we opened our hearts, chaotic.
thanks for reading,
noor
Wow, your writing is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading it :-)
thank you Jollygirl! that's so sweet <3
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ReplyDelete~izzy
*bows*
DeleteI love this so much! You're an amazing writer ♥
ReplyDeleteAmy xx
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AHHHH thank you so much Amy :D
DeleteI love this, Noor:)
ReplyDeleteeek thank you love xx
DeleteThis is lovely. I enjoyed it! <3
ReplyDeletexoxo Morning
Thanks Morning! It will never compare to your writing :P <3
DeleteYou're a brilliant writer, you should consider writing a short collection of poems.
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Thank you! I've tried but I can't write enough to create an entire collection :(
DeleteUghhh so pretty. I always admire people who can write poetry because I suck at it. xD
ReplyDelete// katie grace
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"Too rare to die" afhdhsg gr8 reference
ReplyDeleteI really liked this poem! I'm not the best at poetry, but I really enjoy reading it. Today I flew on a plane for the first time(unaccompanied!), and it was so beautiful because we took off during sunrise, so I saw the sunrise combined with seeing the buildings get smaller and smaller below the plane, and it was beautiful. This poem reminded me of that moment.
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Lovely poetry, Noor!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love it!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love your poems.
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