when i break

sometimes I break.
when the world gets to heavy for my shoulders
I b r e a k
I break and I cry and I feel like death
everything comes upon me and shatters me
to pieces until I can break no more
then I come back from the prison
 that kept me once before 
and pick up my pieces
and piece them together
until I am broken no more
everyone breaks sometimes
it's part of our nature
we just need to remember
to piece ourselves back together
and know that everything will be okay
I need to pick up my pieces. I wrote this out of frustration. This poem describes my life today. I forgot I had a quiz today and some pieces broke off. I did horrible in my violin lesson and some more pieces broke off. And then I tried to write 3 posts, and Blogger failed to meet my standards, and I broke.
But I've escaped the frustration prison, and I'm attempting to piece myself back together.
I wrote this so you would know that everything is going to be okay, and that's its okay to break sometimes, just put your pieces back together.
My inbox is always open guys, and so is my heart <3
Have a lovely day you wonderful people of the internet, I really do love you all :)
Thanks for reading,


  1. What a sweet heartfelt post, Noor. I totally understand what you mean with this poem.
    <3, -Elsie

    1. Thank you Elsie, I'm glad someone understands <3

  2. Thank you for this post. Sometimes I read really depressing poems, but they seldom turn encouraging like yours is. It's okay not to be okay.

  3. Bad incidents always lead to bad days, but tomorrow will always be better.

    The Life of Little Me

  4. this is an awesome post. I'm so glad that some people know that bad things always turn good. hope you don't have any other bad incidents

    1. Thank you Mia! And sadly, I'm sure I'll have more bad incidents, but I'll get through them :)

  5. Wow, I really love this poem! I love how encouraging it is!

    1. Thanks Jollygirl, I'm glad it is, that's what I was going for!

  6. Noor, can I just say how uplifting this post was? <3 Thank you for sharing the poem! These past few weeks have been stressful because of school -- to the point where I've been having 3 or 4 hours of sleep everyday. I have often broke down because I was so tired and sad and depressed lol ^_^" Thank you so much for this! And I hope you have a great day today!

    Jillian @ Jillian's Books

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    1. Never mind! I found it on your post! Sorry just skimmed it 1st time!


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