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Monday

they know your stories



the birds
they know you
they don't like you

their songs
aren't sweet melodies of joy
you'd know, if you understood

you've done things
they know, i do too.
but i keep quiet, they don't

the birds know your stories
they won't let you forget
the things you've done

in the night
you thought you were safe.
no darling, the birds are always there.

and you can never hide from them.

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inspired by a fall out boy lyric: If you knew, what the bluebirds sang at you, you would never sing along.

~Noor

26 comments:

  1. Love this,and inspired by Fall Out Boy even better.

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    1. Thank you Skye! And yes, aren't they just the best <3

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    1. No, I don't hate you :P Although, they wrote Centuries and Uma Thurman, you might know them. Or they may not be your style, that's alright too!

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    2. I listened to them, I feel like they're rock, my style is more POP. Selena is the best yo!

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  3. Never heard Fall Out Boy, but this poem is fab.

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    1. Ahh you should listen to them, they're fabulous x Thank you so much Jordy, your comments are always the sweetest :)

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  4. You guys have got to hear Fall Out Boy!
    Hey Noor, its Maddie from HelloStyle. Could you check out my blog? I would also like some permission for something... yeah, just check it out! xxmarvellousmaddiexx.blogspot.com
    Thanks!
    ~Maddie

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  5. WOW! Amazing poem, though it's a bit dark, still TOTALLY love it. ;D
    -Dani

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    1. thank you Dani <3 Yes it is, I'm glad you caught the ominous tone that I was trying to create :D

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  6. This is really mind provoking! I love how lyrics can inspire you to expand

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    1. Thank you Abigayle! And yes, I find I can go into much deeper thought by analyzing one interesting lyric in a song :)

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  7. This is really mind provoking! I love how lyrics can inspire you to expand

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    1. Thank you Grace, and thanks for visiting! <3

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  9. Woah! Lyrics inspiring poetry, that was beautiful.

    -Edie
    WWW.mintyperfections.co.uk

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    1. Thank you Edie, lyrics can create such gorgeous words sometimes!

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  10. Wowowowowowow Noor, this is great!

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  11. Whoa. whoawhoawoehfsdlkjhfkldsfl. this is so good and deep it left me like breathless :o literally speechless your words are beautiful xx

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  12. I don't really like myself right now. In fact, I don't like most people right now. So why should the overseeing creatures like us?

    -M
    The Life of Little Me

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  13. This blew my mind! I love the way this poem was written.

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  14. This is such a great poem! I love that you portrayed birds different than they usually are ♥
    Amy xx

    Little Moon Dragon

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  16. Bautiful, and lovely! Do the birds know our stories?
    Ha ha just kidding! Awesome poem!

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