tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post5353108196629305326..comments2024-03-27T22:08:11.001-07:00Comments on bookmarkd: Some More WritingNoorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-33374492089486653682015-05-10T15:48:41.440-07:002015-05-10T15:48:41.440-07:00Hi Noor, this is a pretty good descriptive piece....Hi Noor, this is a pretty good descriptive piece. I like how you depicted the experience by describing the sense of touch felt by the third person such as the winds, the soft woolen chair and heat from the flames in the house. Good read. :) <br /><br />Dian <br /><a href="http://thehappycandle.blogspot.sg" rel="nofollow">The Happy Candle</a>Dianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02600937314345374019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-64845445540075718492015-05-10T15:47:10.426-07:002015-05-10T15:47:10.426-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Dianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02600937314345374019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-90275649053695470352015-05-10T05:01:19.255-07:002015-05-10T05:01:19.255-07:00Hi Noor um I think you're a REALLY good blog d...Hi Noor um I think you're a REALLY good blog designer so I was wondering If you could make one for me? I just want the background white and the name of my blog a light colour. Thanks please get back to me ASAPRukiya Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00533442768823916069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-41310129236780171442015-05-10T04:45:26.244-07:002015-05-10T04:45:26.244-07:00OMG I loooovvveee your new design Noor it's AW...OMG I loooovvveee your new design Noor it's AWESOME! Outstanding writing!Rukiya Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00533442768823916069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-71949588480519828962015-05-09T20:07:04.398-07:002015-05-09T20:07:04.398-07:00Such a sweet little bit of writing ! You are an ou...Such a sweet little bit of writing ! You are an outstanding writer!!!!!!<br />ClaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-20499033638690962122015-05-09T14:28:59.881-07:002015-05-09T14:28:59.881-07:00I absolutely love your writing! It's such a cu...I absolutely love your writing! It's such a cute story ♥<br />Amy xx<br /><br /><a href="http://littlemoondragon.blogspot.ca/" rel="nofollow">Little Moon Dragon</a>Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10618466762311237386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-75901541613659035862015-05-09T12:44:57.464-07:002015-05-09T12:44:57.464-07:00I love this! Super cute and gave me a little bit o...I love this! Super cute and gave me a little bit of the feels ♥<br /><br />Daisy ○ <a href="http://littlekawaiidaisy.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">LittleKawaiiDaisy</a><br />ellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16888539258013846681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-3393082692670178152015-05-09T06:50:43.380-07:002015-05-09T06:50:43.380-07:00Wow your amazing at writing xxx
http://agirlblogx...Wow your amazing at writing xxx <br />http://agirlblogx.blogspot.co.uk/a girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04186156084736356646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-34686087995013593832015-05-08T13:09:31.718-07:002015-05-08T13:09:31.718-07:00Thanks Oakstar!!Thanks Oakstar!!Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-90570117060949507692015-05-08T13:01:20.311-07:002015-05-08T13:01:20.311-07:00Thanks jo, I'm happy you enjoyed!Thanks jo, I'm happy you enjoyed!Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-52752658354478905902015-05-08T12:59:22.266-07:002015-05-08T12:59:22.266-07:00Thank you Miss Internet!Thank you Miss Internet!Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-43943071760803481512015-05-08T12:56:43.118-07:002015-05-08T12:56:43.118-07:00Thanks BNS, I'm happy you liked my writing!Thanks BNS, I'm happy you liked my writing!Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-39565503834951090512015-05-08T12:50:05.022-07:002015-05-08T12:50:05.022-07:00Thanks Morning, I'm so glad you liked it!Thanks Morning, I'm so glad you liked it!Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-41228275898841024832015-05-08T12:29:08.150-07:002015-05-08T12:29:08.150-07:00Thanks so much Ellie! I really appreciate the advi...Thanks so much Ellie! I really appreciate the advice, I'm so glad you were honest!<br />Noorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00632409992742705091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-70841162660212267222015-05-08T08:24:56.466-07:002015-05-08T08:24:56.466-07:00Great !Great !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00855591366556453162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-75622944825986125632015-05-08T03:23:31.440-07:002015-05-08T03:23:31.440-07:00I like the contrast between the cold feeling at th...I like the contrast between the cold feeling at the beginning of the story and the warm feeling at the end! Great job!Aylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16717898479907365157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-36030842229213768782015-05-07T23:07:40.650-07:002015-05-07T23:07:40.650-07:00Very lovely. I haven't read a good 2nd person ...Very lovely. I haven't read a good 2nd person tale like this in a while! :)jodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15645843961463128576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-39364982650412077482015-05-07T23:00:48.010-07:002015-05-07T23:00:48.010-07:00It's amazing! You're really good! XoxoIt's amazing! You're really good! XoxoMiss Internethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10596344934823347181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-2970348399271319342015-05-07T18:58:56.337-07:002015-05-07T18:58:56.337-07:00I love reading introductions and starts to stories...I love reading introductions and starts to stories because they are so full of detail. The second person is such an interesting perspective to read!Bridgettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02527375300166440170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-74806414087040660142015-05-07T18:58:06.283-07:002015-05-07T18:58:06.283-07:00Wow! I can feel the fire and the warmth represente...Wow! I can feel the fire and the warmth represented in the story. Nice job on the second person POV; that takes skill. ^.^<br /><br />xoxo MorningAbigail Lennahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00629691351291882685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3803586190039380228.post-12483351461985706222015-05-07T16:56:40.486-07:002015-05-07T16:56:40.486-07:00I really like this! :) The plot is awesome, and I ...I really like this! :) The plot is awesome, and I can perfectly feel what it would be like inside the house. You also did a great job with second person narrative - that's usually hard to do, but you crushed it. :) The one thing I would say is that it wasn't clear to me at first what the weather was. I thought it was just a cold, clear, calm day, and then BAM - snowstorm. Maybe establish right off the bat that the main character is in a snowstorm. But, other than that, awesome job!<br /><br />- EllieEleanorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08016450998401859766noreply@blogger.com